Because Of That First Christmas day......

Okay, so today I wrote a song. Well......not exactly a song, since it isn't set to music.....I can't write music, don't know how. But.....anyway, I wrote what I hope to be a song eventually, if I can get mom to write music to it. Or Colette....like she needs more work, being a college student and all! But, I'm getting distracted. What this post was suppose to be about was my song.....er......poem. I can't get the first verse right. So, I figured that the like.....what is it.....three....four.....people who read my blog, could maybe give me suggestions.

("Cara......hello.....come in, Cara.......earth to Cara.....")

("Huh, yeah? What?")

("There's only one person who reads your blog, deary!")

("HUH!? Oh, uh....yeah.....okay. Well, then the one person who reads my blog.")

(that would be you!)

("THANKS!!!!!")

Anyway, here's the song/poem.

Because Of That First Christmas Day

Christmas time is here once again,
another year has passed by,
and I can't stop thinking of You,
and how you saved the world.???????????????

(HELP THIS POOR LITTLE VERSE! make a new one up completely or make it rhyme!)

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You came to earth, a tiny babe,
You dwelt among sinful men.
Jesus, you became man, from birth,
thirty-three years, on this earth.

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Oh, and You bled and died for those,
who mocked Your holy name, Lord.
Love shined in Your eyes for those men,
and You took away their sin.

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And as that whip flew through the air,
when it cracked upon Your back,
Oh, You forgave them, even then.
As You were whipped by those men.

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And it's because You came to earth,
a precious, tiny, baby boy.
Because of that first Christmas day,
I am forgiven today.

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And it's because You came to earth,
a precious, tiny, baby boy.
Because of that first Christmas day,
I am forgiven today.

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Oh, you could have walked away,
you didn't have to come down to earth.
But you did it for my sake,
For the world, you died and broke death's sway.